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Old 06-13-2010   #1
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i seek to photograph the things not seen.

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Old 06-14-2010   #2
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Criticism would be much appreciated ...
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i seek to photograph the things not seen.

" ... faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen." Hebrews 11-1
"One eye sees. The other eye feels." - Paul Klee
"... For the things that are seen are transient, but the things that are unseen are eternal." - apostle Paul, 2 Corinthians, 4:18
"Film will only become art when it's materials are as inexpensive as pencil and paper." - Jean Cocteau

http://blackcreekjournal.blogspot.com/
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Old 06-14-2010   #3
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Having just perused your blog, I'm impressed with your work, but I have to say this one isn't working for me. Too many focal points. I'll admit a bias towards people photography, but I'd love to see you get a lot closer and really focus on one thing.

Lots of potential here, so keep at it!
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Old 06-14-2010   #4
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I think the image is too bright/contrasty. Also, the subject matter and composition do not entirely convince me of anything going on in particular.
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