OK, what still bothers me on the photo(after rich's correction) is the hand of her, the right hand. I tried to do something about it but did not manage too well(i suck in photoshop). Two things about it: one is, the abrupt change of skin colour at the wrist (some burn-in helped this a bit but not much), from greenish-yellowish to more magenta. I dodged the upper, darker region of the arm, and the increased the burn tool size to cover the full arm+hand and burned it in a bit, this way it's somewhat more uniform(but got a bit murky, unsmooth skin on the arm)
The second thing, the pullover is so black, the hand/arm seems to hang there in the air without any support. This i couldn't help at all (dodging the pullover resulted in just noise).
I also burned in the hotspot on her front and lighter skin on her right shoulder a bit, and the skeleton chest and hip, there were a tad too bright. And i lowered the "master" saturation to -18 from Rich's version, but that's just my taste
She has gorgeous eyes...
(i did not touch those, they were perfect!)