Nice composition. But you might want to check the focus: in either picture shown, nothing is in sharp
- ground glass; pointing at distant (>100m) object
- glass plate (ground or not) at film position with some black lines drawn in film plane, stare into the Silett lens with a known good SLR. With both camera lenses set at infinity, object should appear sharp; If not, adjust the Silette focus scale. A method proposed by Rick Olesson, I believe.