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paulfish4570
06-13-2010, 13:49
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b206/fish280/Bessa%20alignment%20angst%20bw400cn%20june%202010/R1-19-1-1.jpg
Bessa R, Canon 50/1.8, BW400CN
paulfish4570
06-14-2010, 14:25
Criticism would be much appreciated ...
Having just perused your blog, I'm impressed with your work, but I have to say this one isn't working for me. Too many focal points. I'll admit a bias towards people photography, but I'd love to see you get a lot closer and really focus on one thing.
Lots of potential here, so keep at it!
I think the image is too bright/contrasty. Also, the subject matter and composition do not entirely convince me of anything going on in particular.
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