White streetside

[paulfish4570]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b206/fish280/Bessa%20alignment%20angst%20bw400cn%20june%202010/R1-19-1-1.jpg
Bessa R, Canon 50/1.8, BW400CN

[paulfish4570]

Criticism would be much appreciated ...

[Sine]

Having just perused your blog, I'm impressed with your work, but I have to say this one isn't working for me. Too many focal points. I'll admit a bias towards people photography, but I'd love to see you get a lot closer and really focus on one thing.

Lots of potential here, so keep at it!

[filmfan]

I think the image is too bright/contrasty. Also, the subject matter and composition do not entirely convince me of anything going on in particular.